Kia Ora Oliver, I can see in your about me that you like to play soccer. How lucky that you get to learn new ball skills at school. I wonder if you could read your sentence and see how it sounds. Do you think you could have a go at editing it, adding capitals, commas and maybe even a full stop:-) You may like to tell your reader some more information too, I would be interested to know what new skills you learnt. Tania
Kia Ora Oliver,
ReplyDeleteI can see in your about me that you like to play soccer. How lucky that you get to learn new ball skills at school. I wonder if you could read your sentence and see how it sounds. Do you think you could have a go at editing it, adding capitals, commas and maybe even a full stop:-) You may like to tell your reader some more information too, I would be interested to know what new skills you learnt.
Tania
Well Done Oliver
ReplyDeleteI like your post of when we did soccer. You must be good did you enjoy it?
How long have you played soccer?
Daniel